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I have seen the beauty of a dove beneath the skies
I have told the harshest truths, and I have told some lies
I have seen a child cry into its mother's arms
I have been that weeping girl who held onto self-harm

I have heard the laughter of a man about to die
I have seen the anger resting deep within their eyes
I have been the victim of my own disgusting thoughts
I have seen the best of people slowly start to rot

I have felt the heartache; I have seen a love go blue…
So much time is left to spare, but so much less to do…
Yep :)
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another good won. Mine are written over the years. How long have you been writing? I seriously don't think I could write like you do. You have real vision as one person said here. Your words sing...
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3 I've been writing for 6 years.
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ERaven77 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
6 years wow...
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Hyles Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
I think anyone who thinks there is a lot of time and so little to do must be a boring motherfucker who needs some interests and hobbies. The world is out there, there are things to see, learn, and experience. Only an idiot would hold back from that because of some heartache that they're desperately clinging to and whatnot.
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poetryfreak15 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Love it!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! <3
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poetryfreak15 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Welcome!
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Beautiful...

Morbidly beautiful - The best kind. <3
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks :)
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GrimdarkElusive Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Welcome~ :3
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Cruxifix96 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Photographer
*driven speechless*

Makes me feel this is a eulogy...
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immortalSi Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
This is a very different way to look at things. I usually dislike poets like Austin and such because to me they try to paint a picture of idealism, not reality. In other words, I really like this.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you!! <3
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myhopeendures Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very good!
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 thank you!
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myhopeendures Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :)
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
this is really good! ^.^ keep up the good work deary
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks love!
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
ur welcome dear! :huggle: we should visit !
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Shuttleformer Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
This is cool.
... and... a little disturbing...
But in a good way. ;)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, well thanks <3
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Shuttleformer Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
You're welcome. :D
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