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I have seen the beauty of a dove beneath the skies
I have told the harshest truths, and I have told some lies
I have seen a child cry into its mother's arms
I have been that weeping girl who held onto self-harm

I have heard the laughter of a man about to die
I have seen the anger resting deep within their eyes
I have been the victim of my own disgusting thoughts
I have seen the best of people slowly start to rot

I have felt the heartache; I have seen a love go blue…
So much time is left to spare, but so much less to do…
Yep :)
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ERaven77 Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Another good won. Mine are written over the years. How long have you been writing? I seriously don't think I could write like you do. You have real vision as one person said here. Your words sing...
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MikkiMarie Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3 I've been writing for 6 years.
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ERaven77 Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
6 years wow...
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I think anyone who thinks there is a lot of time and so little to do must be a boring motherfucker who needs some interests and hobbies. The world is out there, there are things to see, learn, and experience. Only an idiot would hold back from that because of some heartache that they're desperately clinging to and whatnot.
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MikkiMarie Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! <3
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Beautiful...

Morbidly beautiful - The best kind. <3
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MikkiMarie Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks :)
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