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Sometimes, when I'm sad
I remember that one time,
All I had to worry about was
If the bubbles I had blown, were about to
Disappear.

Sometimes, when I'm sad
I remember that one time,
I began to worry about the day that
My childhood would simply
Disappear.

Sometimes, when I'm sad
I remember that some day,
When I'm sitting with my husband
In the old old house... my days will simply
Disappear.

And that day,
The day when my heartbeat is
Silenced...
The day when my breath
Truly gets taken away.
That's the day
When my worries, my concerns, my fears...
Will simply...

Disappear.
Just something I quickly wrote <3
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cricket682 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Absolutely amazing...all of them. Total ah..ha...moment(s).   While I know your friend, Pain, all too well and I don't wish her on anyone....ever.  There is something comforting (for lack of a better word) about not feeling isolated in the depths of my not so nice but very busy thoughts..ridicule.  As for your piece regarding that Ms. Depression...needs to be plastered on  taxis, buses, billboards and buildings from one end of the country to the other! So sick of people thinking all you have to do is slap on a smile and life is good , and you are great and brain is healthy.  If only.......  You're very gifted.  Thanks for making me feel not so crappy about this little thing called life...Peace
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salliespectre Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Your poetry is inspiring. I am an old gal, but enjoy words from heart and spirit, which you truly have. Thank you for blessing me!
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ZephFromWest Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
for something you quickly wrote this is very beautiful. It made my eyes almost in tears. There something si true in this, the fact, that even if we have so many days in our lives, they all will so soon dissapear. I like this very much.
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Cwolf0615 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I wish I had a time all I had to worry about was bubbles popping. :ohnoes:

Its a really nice poem though, I wish I could write like you. :aww:

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Writergal102 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
I really like this.
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Mandithefail Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Aw :( are you depressed?I am always depressed.I feel like I am a fail in life and When I fall I can't get up so I cry and dig my self out but i end up falling back in or traping myself in :/ I m not good to this world.All I do is make people mad or sad or what ever :( I m not perfect I m human sorry.I dont know what you are but I am human.But I try to make others happy and make them not seem as if Iwere sad.I smile when I can and make bad things good things nd keep good things better things <3 I love my family and my life I may be poor and no use but I have a life a roof over my head I have friends and thats all i need in life. <3 but sometimes my friends tht are on the internet my irl friends i mean what friends irl anywho online friends sometimes it seems as if they forget about me and I am human... human sorry anywho i love all your work art work and jsut EVERYTHIINNGG
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this <3
Sometimes I'm wondering about myself why I worry so much about this or that.
I hope that many of my fears and concerns will disappear or weaken when I am still alive.
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o0CookieMonster0o Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
...simply beautiful
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kucai Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
sad :(
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Kijinii Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful! :heart:
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