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August 1, 2013
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You want to end it?
Think of this.
You write your suicide note... And you set it on the table.
You take your razor, your silver, two inch razor. And you start to slide it across your wrist. You barely feel a thing. After all, the pain of life is more than the pain of the blade.
And you take that belt you never wore, the one that was too tight, the one you starved yourself to fit into. And you wrap it once, twice around your neck... and you pull it tight.
Barely breathing, you put the ends of the belt on something to hold you up.
Something to strangle you.
Something to kill you.

And you die.

And that's the end, right?
So, so wrong.

Your younger brother, the four year old little boy that you loved so much. He walks into your room, only to find you hanging there, lifelessly. Only to find you with dried tears on your pale face. Only to find your suicide note... the one you left right before you died.

And so he runs in tears to your mother. And she reads the note, barely able to breathe from the thought of it.
And soon, the word gets around. You committed suicide. You're done. You're gone. It's over.

The girl who told you that you were fat... she admits that you were beautiful. She felt so bad, she became anorexic.
The boy who told you that you were ugly... he admits that you were special. He felt so bad, he began to cut himself.
The person who told you that you were stupid... he admits he was jealous. He felt so bad, he slipped into a depression due to guilt.

Your younger brother grows up, blaming himself for your suicide every day. Your mother cries at night until she falls asleep, that is, if she sleeps at all. Your father has a meltdown that causes him to turn into an alcoholic. Your sister attempted a suicide because she blamed herself, too.

Everybody misses you. Everybody wants you back.

Now let's go back to right now.
you think you want to end it?
That razor. That silver, two inch razor. I know, sometimes the pain of life is worse than the pain brought to you by the blade.
But do you know how many people need you?
Do you know how many people love you?
Do you know how many people want you to stay?
Someone is thinking of you.

So think of them, too.

Stay strong.

And never.
Not a poem....

Just a rant...
Just a story.

Just don't give up you guys. I'll cry :(

I love you all.

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FiftyShadesOfFlutter Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student
I've had my plenty share of pain from my life,ecspecially my freshmen was so awful and felt never ending...things like this made me not give in.
Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student General Artist
this bout made me cry...
:icontears-plz: did...

thanks for another awesome poem/rant or whatever you classify it as. its good. makes people think. well done. love ya, keep on writing!
vlancii Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
You're work makes me cry a lot!  Beautiful!!!
hothead14 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
I have not had a great time the past few months. Today was one of the worst... And this made me cry again at the thought...
ooOSwiftnessOoo Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
I've never suffered any of this stuff, but I worry for people who do. This is beautiful, and holds a strong message.
FriesianKiss Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
One word. Beautiful.
Annika-san Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Writer
it's thing like this that save me
Chamerona Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for making this poem :iconcryforeverplz: *hugs u* :iconbrohugplz*
its a good thing my attempt of suiscide did not work.
WhySoSeriousFriends Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The critique I wrote on 'Hello Darling' applies so well to this too. I cannot thank you enough.
EkimAdonihs1 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
I'm crying! Just. Shut up and give me a tissue. 
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