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The poison resting beneath my lungs
As fire in the rain
The lies painting my tongue
The crimson blood stains
A scream drenching the skies
A shining blade of diamond rings
Sinking into your cries
A nightmare of the prettiest things
A demon with wings
Resting in my heart
So tell me again,
Again and again...
"Till death do us part."
Roarrr.
Creepy poetry? i think yes!
Comments are appreciated :)
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ladyfaith93 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?
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Deaths-Desire12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
i don't think it is creepy at all it is more beautiful than the moon on a cloudless night
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EdisCole17 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Romeo and Juliet me thinks?
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N4N055 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Writer
It is creepy alright! But it's nice! :)
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deadxxxxx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
LOVE,LOVE LOVE IT!!
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SuperNinjaBearKick4u Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...creepy...epicness...
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imimad Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
i like this one !!
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:iconeclipse-14:
Eclipse-14 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it actually pierced my heart for i don't know
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rosiEwoLF47310 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! That really touched somewhere inside XD Creepy poetry indeed ;)
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AlphonseElricsWife Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
haha it's funny I have poem with the same name.XD
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AngelfearUchiha Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This amazing!!
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Soooo nice and beautiful...and creepy....
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citizen17 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the mystical imagery in this one.
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Farbeczek77 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really beautiful. I love your poetry
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Unknown-as-if-Astro Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Awesome. Legit awesome. Not just normal awesome, but actual legit awesome.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha xD Thanks :3
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013   Writer
GAHHH creepy poetry my favorite i loved it alot :))
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha oh yes I know. =P Thanks brah!
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lulurockz Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Am i the only one who was thinking of romeo and juliet...
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O possibly XD
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CremePuffMarshmallow Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconbravoplz:Too good for words.
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nekowanderer Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the pictures that came to mind while reading this
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SeiRyuSeijin Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa... I love it! This is beautiful poetry, amazing job~ ^^ :thumbsup:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! ^^
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SAMDisbored Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
This is almost like a story to me, like you just told me a story.
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virginiacunningham12 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
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CoArtDeviant Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I think creepy is just a different word for fear. The images that the words conjured up in my head touched some of our oldest and strongest emotions. Anything that gets me to that place is fair game!
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Creepy makes it more deeper in meaning. Technically reality. It's great! Actually...I don't find it creepy anyway. ^3^
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome :3
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
No problem. I like it creppy.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks :)
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Kijinii Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, It is creepy, but I like it :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you :D
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
A little creepy yes, pleased this isn't a part of the marriage vows lol
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! Yeahhh... I felt like something creepy today.
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