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The poison resting beneath my lungs
As fire in the rain
The lies painting my tongue
The crimson blood stains
A scream drenching the skies
A shining blade of diamond rings
Sinking into your cries
A nightmare of the prettiest things
A demon with wings
Resting in my heart
So tell me again,
Again and again...
"Till death do us part."
Roarrr.
Creepy poetry? i think yes!
Comments are appreciated :)
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Deaths-Desire12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
i don't think it is creepy at all it is more beautiful than the moon on a cloudless night
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EdisCole17 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Romeo and Juliet me thinks?
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N4N055 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Student Writer
It is creepy alright! But it's nice! :)
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deadxxxxx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
LOVE,LOVE LOVE IT!!
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SuperNinjaBearKick4u Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...creepy...epicness...
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imimad Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
i like this one !!
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:iconeclipse-14:
Eclipse-14 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it actually pierced my heart for i don't know
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rosiEwoLF47310 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! That really touched somewhere inside XD Creepy poetry indeed ;)
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AlphonseElricsWife Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
haha it's funny I have poem with the same name.XD
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AngelfearUchiha Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This amazing!!
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Sneeuwmaan Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Soooo nice and beautiful...and creepy....
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:iconcitizen17:
citizen17 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the mystical imagery in this one.
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Farbeczek77 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really beautiful. I love your poetry
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Unknown-as-if-Astro Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
Awesome. Legit awesome. Not just normal awesome, but actual legit awesome.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha xD Thanks :3
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breathinbreathout Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013   Writer
GAHHH creepy poetry my favorite i loved it alot :))
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha oh yes I know. =P Thanks brah!
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lulurockz Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Am i the only one who was thinking of romeo and juliet...
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_O possibly XD
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CremePuffMarshmallow Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconbravoplz:Too good for words.
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nekowanderer Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the pictures that came to mind while reading this
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SeiRyuSeijin Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting.
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa... I love it! This is beautiful poetry, amazing job~ ^^ :thumbsup:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! ^^
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SAMDisbored Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
This is almost like a story to me, like you just told me a story.
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virginiacunningham12 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
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CoArtDeviant Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I think creepy is just a different word for fear. The images that the words conjured up in my head touched some of our oldest and strongest emotions. Anything that gets me to that place is fair game!
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Creepy makes it more deeper in meaning. Technically reality. It's great! Actually...I don't find it creepy anyway. ^3^
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome :3
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
No problem. I like it creppy.
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks :)
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Kijinii Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, It is creepy, but I like it :)
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you :D
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
A little creepy yes, pleased this isn't a part of the marriage vows lol
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha! Yeahhh... I felt like something creepy today.
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