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To some people, it’s called breathing.
To me, it’s called inhaling poison,
Which drenches my lungs and sinks into my bones
And melts into my mind.

To some people, it’s called anxiety.
To me, it’s called an unbearable shakiness in my soul
The nervousness preventing my from ever escaping
This disease in my heart.

To some people, it’s called living.
To me, it’s called never being able to run away.
Never being able to truly go, truly leave.
To me, it’s called being caught in a nightmare,
While struggling to dream.
Chasing a mystery with no solution.
Escaping your own sanity to reach more sanity,
Freeing yourself from your happiness to find more happiness.
To some people, it’s called life.
To me?

There’s no such thing.
Not pleased with this one.
But yeah. comments?
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Jan 20, 2014  Student General Artist
of course its beautiful. and touching. yours always are.

the only lines i don't get are the "escaping your own sanity to reach more sanity, Freeing yourself from your happiness to find more happiness."

but its still awesome!
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Loving-Chakra Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Nonsense! This is lovely :heart:
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beautiful
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MikkiMarie Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you bwandon
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Hi, why not pleased? Your words have so much conviction to it, and the images you put in the stanza about living, I don't even have the right words to accurately describe; I see and feel them at the same time!:)
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CommanderScarr Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Meow :3 Heart 
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