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Smiling, as the spears sink into your
Flesh.
The excitement. The joy.
The pleasure.

Slowly, I slice through you
So slowly, so painfully.
The rush. The power.
The satisfaction.

And then, suddenly
As if a demand from demons had told me to do it…
I raise the fork to my mouth and take a bite.
Waffles.
:) Enjoy!
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:iconmiyurisa13:
MiyuRisa13 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Haha, wow... Waffles... Orange - Rin Kagamine 
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BeautifulChaos99 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sweet hot pepper jack cheese. that was the best eating play-by-play ive ever read IN MY LIFE.
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:iconmimitrammell:
MimiTrammell Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Om nom nom
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:iconzereverefano:
Zereverefano Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Anyone else thinking of 'Slightly Damned', hmm?
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:iconhiivala:
hiivala Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
O__o my nickname is waffle.. you know.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Murhurhur C:<
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ArtGeekSparkle Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
This is just... awesome!
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kirafaclaws22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How to make a dark poem suddenly halarious*points to poem*:D i laughed so hard
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:iconru1n3d:
Ru1n3d Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D Love it
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YingoDaPenguin Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
hahaha oh the irony XD
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:iconmazimadi1234:
MAziMadi1234 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
o...mg xDDDDD
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anime12violet Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this would be really different if you were to switch the word Waffles with something else.
like puppies or flesh
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:iconcrazyzakuna:
CrazyZakuna Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I laughed so hard XD You are truly awesome.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAY! :3 I'm glad XD
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Sakera-Draw Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha love this!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks! :D
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Sakera-Draw Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
anytime! :heart:
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you like waffles? :P
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YES I LIKE WAFFLES.
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:iconthespitfirespirit:
TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you like pancakes?
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
.. no actually. O_o
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:iconthespitfirespirit:
TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...YOU WRECKED IT. *cries* jk :P
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exhalants Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
while i find this utterly adorable and left me completely amused, with satisfaction--and normally, things like these don't seem to intrigue me in the slightest bit from the usual chaos sputtered across the popular page, but this one's atleast noticeable with wit, i believe

quite nice

i'd suggest you change the title to something unrelated to the poem since it is hinted toward the end, and revealed at the end and would leave further amusement so the reader will read and not particularly just skim and know it before a blink of the eye what you're trying to convey, and it would greatly improve
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kmills95 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O_o
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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VeirocanaHeaven Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
This kinda made my day. It's great:)
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe thanks! :D
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VeirocanaHeaven Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
No problem:D
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momokoondragon Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THATS BEAUTIFUL
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*tears running down my face* I just... it's gawwwgeous.
Thanks :3
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Monochrome-Kitten Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
A lot different from the usual atmosphere in your writing, but it's hilarious! Awesome work, you'll have my full support no matter what path you choose in your writing. Thank you for sharing this with us. :thanks:
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thanks :)
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Monochrome-Kitten Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My pleasure! :aww:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
And now I'm laughing like an idiot.
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha I'm glad!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That awkward moment when you call yourself an idiot and someone seems to agree...
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AstroGirl123 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Waffles....you just made us humans more demonic. :O hahahaha awesome. XD
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks XD
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
LOL, love it, not your usual type, don't you just love waffles
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Waffles are the most delightful thing... ever.
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racerman56 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hot waffles with melted Belgian chocolate and whipped cream mmmmmmmm....
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:iconcaro-kitty:
Caro-Kitty Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not the out come I was expecting but it did leave me pleasantly surprised :)
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ahaha thanks! :D
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lionesspride99 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
looool awesome
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MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ahha thanks XD
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FlameBladeGirl5362 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Writer
haha! so cute! not something you normally write, but still, you the best poet that I've seen on here!
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:iconmikkimarie:
MikkiMarie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
One of my friends asked me to write a poem about waffles, soooo XD Thanks! :)
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FlameBladeGirl5362 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Professional Writer
well your welcome!
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