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King being murdered upon the throne
Dreams made out of solid stone
Learn to fly and learn to crash
Nightmares in a lightning flash
Life's what you get, not what you earn
Too bad you sat back and watched it burn...
I submitted this poem one day before with an ending from someone else. But I liked this ending that :iconbetty-kane: gave me. So I had to resubmit it. :) I wrote the majority of it, and the ending was given to me :)
Go check out my facebook for more poems, to help me end my poems, for photography OR just to chat ^_^ [link]
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BarneyBetsington Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the upload. Good work. :)
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unp021 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I didnt think there was a way out this really intrigued me I am headed right for the top no pressure just check it out
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project-7077 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
no economic problems since i started it
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BillyTree Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
perfect
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WolfKidz Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nice~

~Rattata
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LalalandMuse Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
Oooh, I like this! My favorite lines are "Dreams made out of solid stone," and "Learn to fly and learn to crash." Love it. Great job :D
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Puppyeyes427 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Another good ending would be: Forge your own path, the one you yearn.

Or: It's time for you to take your turn.

Or even: Watch it play and try to learn.

^^
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dreamingdays Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
beautiful writing ^^
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DemoOps Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
I like it!
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