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A thirteen-year-old poet,
Whispers frolicking among her tongue
As a ballet dancer across a stage.

What to write, oh, what to write…

Her fingers wrapped around a pencil,
Gently tickling the page
With a language between herself
And her imagination.

Thoughts race through her mind,
One,
Two,
Three,
Quick!
Three,
Two,
One,
Gone.

Frozen hands on a silver clock
Turning moments into
D r e a d f u l     h o u r s .

What to write, oh, what to write…

Crickets stop their chirping,
Birds start to sing.
Five thirty in the morning,
And not a single word on paper.

What to write, oh, what to write…

She begins to scribble across the page,
Doodles and anything that crosses her mind.
Words begin flooding her thoughts,
As she wrinkles the paper and grabs a clean sheet.

“A thirteen year old poet,
Whispers frolicking among her tongue
As a ballet dancer across a stage…"


And just as she nears the end
Of these words,
These messy,
Crazy,
Demented words...

Thoughts race through her mind.
One,
Two,
Three,

Quick!

Three,
Two,
One…

Gone.
Yes, it was five thirty, in the morning, when I wrote this.
Yes it is about me ._.
Yes it failed.
Yes I am posting it anyway.
Yes, I am prepared for all the hate comments.
But before you say anything, I'M SORRY :iconcryingplz: I really tried my best for being so tired.

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:iconmasterofthestorm:
Sorry? This is wonderful! A well versed piece we can all relate to. I know I can relate. 
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Unisis-2-in-1-beauty Jan 30, 2014  Student General Artist
good job for being so tired, bravo. ^-^
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Melodygirl74 Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
youre a 13 year old poet
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:iconcamiee1233:
I love this! Amazing!!!
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DreamState1994 Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hate? No way! I love this! This describes me almost perfectly when I have writer's block (aside from the fact that I'm 18 and not 13 and I haven't obtained enough energy to get up that early or stay up that late). Actually, right now I feel inspired. :D


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mystifytheworld Jul 22, 2013  Student Writer
hahaha this is understandable to aaaany writer.
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chewyraezen Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Look at all the wonderful comments! believe them. You have wonderful potential and a gift. Keep writing!
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racerman56 Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Not a fail at all, and no need to apologise, portrays how you felt when you wrote it, love it
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Actually?.....I love it :D
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violet---stone Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
I like it. If I wrote this I wouldn't be expecting hate comments. Do you do ballet? Because that would make the ballet reference make more sense. (Im a ballet dancer.)
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