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Let's Play a Game

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Let's play a game.

I don't like the game we play
But he says we have to.
After all, I am
Daddy's little girl.

Don't move...

I can't.
I'm too sad to move.
I don't like this game.
But I am
Daddy's little girl.

There. Wasn't that nice?

No, Daddy.
I don't like our games...
But I guess I have to
Because I'm
Daddy's little girl.

We can play again later.

I don't want to play later!
I don't. Like. Our. Games.
But I have to play them.
Because I'm
Daddy's little girl.

It's fun. Isn't it?

No daddy...
I don't want to be
Daddy's
Little
Girl.

I'm sick of being
Daddy's little girl
In Daddy's world
With Daddy's games.

Let me grab this knife, Daddy.
Let me hurt you, Daddy.
The way you hurt me.
Slowly.

Daddy?
I don't want to be your little girl.

... Daddy...
I want to play a game.
O_O
*shivers*

Just a quick poem I wrote about a sexually abused little girl, NO IT IS NOT NOT NOT NOT NOT A TRUE STORY! Just.... it's not.
Annyway, yeah, sexually abused little girl who kills her sexually abusive father :3 yay.

Comments? critiques? <3
© 2013 - 2024 MikkiMarie
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Wow, just wow. There are a lot of poems about young girls being sexually abused by their fathers, but to truly show the anger they feel, enough anger to want to kill their father, that is rare. I love the repetition of "because I'm Daddy's little girl." It makes it show that she is abused very often and her father says she is his little girl often. This is amazing. The rhythm is great. And I could visualize the young girl's tears that go from sad tears to angry tears. It is not often that a sexual abuse victim fights back, especially a little girl. This was fantastic. I love it.